When You Fall
When your days are filled with nightmaresAnd there's nothing left to holdYou find you're spinning down intothe darkness of your soul.When the voices crowding in your mindAre all that can be heardAnd...
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jazarella .... you wrote exactly the day I am having here!!! I have already fallen ... keep hoping someone can catch me before I hit bottom ...wonderfully well done ... your writing has a great rhythm...
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*smile*... the first answer that came up.. was no one..than I thought... no that is wrong.. my kids have catched me and helped me to get back up on my feet so many times...now Jaz... I am kinda...
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gosh - responses so quickly!!! geez!!! LOL thanks again... ... and innerspirit - am in the middle of writing something else (nice and deranged you'll be happy to know) to give you a laugh... wait and...
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Great use of meter and rhyme to drive this one along...and the kind of question that stops you in your tracks...and sets you to wondering...great writing!Every new beginning comes from some other...
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